Took a crack at sprucing up the ending, which helped bring the word count up to 52,929. The only problem I ran into is that now the main female lead is aware that the main lead has been the subject of a crush that went no where with him, but started to go somewhere with his doppelganger. Now the main lead is wondering what she would think about all of that, and I really left it up in the air.
I may have to take another look at the ending again. I also have to work in a character that shows up in the end earlier. He is mentioned, but it seems odd that he shows up right at the end to tie up a bunch of loose ends.
Perhaps he can show up at the comic shop in the first chapter to taunt the main lead a bit.
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